The sun shines through

Location

30606
United States
33° 56' 41.4384" N, 83° 25' 56.4168" W

The sun shines through the trees

The wind blows through the leaves

The shadows dance and play on the ground

If you listen, you hear its whispering sound

Comments

namjad

You managed to pack enough imagery in this short poem to make it interesting. It is simple but sweet. The poet Gwendolyn Brooks has a similar writing to you: http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poem/17315

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