The Sun Will Shine Another Day

Dark thoughts in my head 

Why can't I just be dead 

Smiling faces in the crowd 

Full of people laughing so loud 

I feel empty 

I feel cold 

Is someone there? Do they care?

The sun will shine another day 

A hand reaches out 

As I cry 

As I shout 

Hold me close 

Please be there 

With this life I can't bear

The only thought in my head

Make me strong 

Let me fight

The sun will shine another day

Comments

Lumos infernalis

this is really awesome... Really well written, + i can relate to it...

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