The Sunflower's Fallen Petals..

by The_Titherian_King

May 24, 2015

She's was so wonderful...so soft and warm..,

That one flower that stands out from the rest of them because of it's warmth,

That Sunflower that emits the warmth that sunflower's should really show and express,

That beauty and peacefulness that's both reserved and for everyone to know and feel,

That is what she was..a beautiful sunflower that expresses warmth towards anyone who let her in...,

But eventually..she had to go..leaving her fallen petals as a reminder that even though she is not with us,

She is among us...,

That one sunflower left a mark on all who let them be marked by her kindness and wisdom..,

May that once radiant sunflower rest in peace.

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Comments (4)

The_Titherian_KingMay 24, 2015

Thank you i dedicated this poem to my mom's godmother who died a few hours ago.

kacieb21May 24, 2015

I like what this poem was trying to express.

The_Titherian_KingMay 24, 2015

So what your saying is that i could gain something from making poems?.. sorry i'm new to this

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