Before The Sunset Went Down

Wed, 10/02/2019 - 16:18 -- Heider

The look of Daisy had trapped him into a never ending feelings.

A boy who felt in a beautiful girl, who was to shy to speak.

Who had loved Daisy for years and years.

But yet can’t speak, he tried to speak but the words won’t come out.

Three years later Daisy Made love with Rose,

the he Boy felt unloved.

 

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Heider

As u can see I’ve made in the second line, it should say a boy who felt in love with a beautiful girl. Then another one in the last sentence it should say  the boy felt unloved.

please be honest and inform be about my poam. I wanna see what I did right and wrong. Let me know if you’re having a hard time understanding my poam.

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