The Sunshine Spark

The candle kid woke up at the light

And went to sleep at the night 

He was not too dim

But not to bright

But he tried his best to be a ray

Of sunlight 

And he was fine

He was ok

He just tryed to keep burning 

Through day to day 

He was not perfect he made mistakes 

But he was loved for them anyway 

The cloud kids lived

 just to darken his life

Said he was not beautiful  but blinding when they brought up his light

They made the days seem shorter

And made everlasting nights

They said he wasn't 

Bright

They called him a hot head

They said he had sun spots

And his flame burned less and less 

Until his light was lost

He grew dark

Then she came

Then came the sunshine spark

And she was on fire

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