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The sun/you


The sun is 5,778 K,but I think your much hotter than that.you turn my life upside

down everyday,when I have a frown you turn it into a smile,life would be so

unpredictable without you,and right now while I have you I love listoning to you tell

me that I am beautiful everyday,I couldn't imagine the world without the sun,because

the world would be full of darkness,and if you came around I believe the sun will

shine again brighter than the moon,so I write this to you now to tell you that you are

irrisitible 

 

I would like to dedicate this to Ryan_15

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Alexandria Miner

MY NAME IS ALEXANDRIA MINER,I AM 14 YEARS OLD,I WAS BORN IN SOUTH CAROLINA,AND I WAS RAISED MOSTLY IN NORTH CAROLINA

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