superstar

October 8, 2012

if you are what you say you are-a superstar have no fear although there are times when you shed a tear no one takes away my shine i take my rightful place because all I've earned is rightfully mine my determination glows like the moonlight in the dark most prestigious moments like this is where i make my mark my legacy will be admirable like a warrior who fights against corruption my heart races with courage that ignites an eruption my muscles intensely feels tight like a dude with no personality i am a superstar. this is who i am always going to be i am a superstar. no one will ever take it from me

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetOct 26, 2012

we are all superstars respect, recognition, appreciation is all something you earned i'm very humble that you found my poem very inspiring check out my other poems

samueltfranklinOct 25, 2012

Firstly, "my determination glows like the moonlight in the dark" is just a plain badass line. Excellent job. "I take my rightful place because all I've earned is rightfully mine" is another great line, and one which really holds a strong truth: people are judged by what they've earned, in terms of deeds, works, positions. "Earned," I think, is the operative word, because one has to work to earn something. What I've essentially taken away from this poem is that to amount to anything--to be a superstar--you must put your entire being into it: soul, mind, and muscle. And whatever station you arrive at, it truly will be rightfully yours, because you will have worked for it. A very inspiring poem.