Surprise

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33334
United States
26° 10' 49.4112" N, 80° 8' 14.1936" W

Wow what a surprise.
you're the cause of my demise
should have known it wouldn't end well
its pretty sad i truly couldn't tell.
What a surprise,
no one understands,
the struggle to constantly make ammends
its as if a teenage girl can't complain
your sympathy, all she wishes to gain
trying to find ways to express herself
yet always seeming to threaten her mental health.
They all watch, they all stare at her
wishing more than anything they could be her
Surprise my life isnt perfect
a pretty face and good grades may seem worth it
yet no motivation and no drive
makes me forget sometimes why i'm even alive.
Surprise, i actually break sometimes
underneath the sarcasm i'm dying for a life line
reach out your hand and take mine
Surprise, you already did, you just came into my life.
Surprise, never felt so loved
feels like a gift from god above
surprise, with one good thing happening
the rest of my existence starts catalyzing
surprise, maybe most people cant understand
but maybe everything isnt so bad.
Surprise, seems as if all is saved
today i won't dig my grave.
Surprise, now its so easy to go on
all he ever does is call me "the sun"
Surprise, I'm starting to believe it too
I finally can achieve all i wish to do.

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savigirl14

this is really good

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