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woke up feeling bad got up, then had to run the sight was so sad wanted help but none will come finally, it stopped but worry did not ripping, dripping, waiting, hoping wanting red, any red but no, blue, its blue two lines, same hue not one but two so its true, horribly true shocking even though i knew I can almost hear the mocking because I'm 16 and pregnant
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i write just because i love to, so any and all critics are welcome to comment

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