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SURRENDER


SURRENDER

I surrender my life to you Jehovah
Show me the way you want me to 
Go and never let me let go !

This is the day I give you full control,
I know I am in a world of haters and 
Lawlessness with no godly devotion,

Though  I could reach out to this hurtful
World and tell them what I hold in my 
Heart and all this world would give me 
Back is an empty heart with no hope 
Of everlasting ,

I would cry with rain pouring tears in
All the things I had to see and feel for
Years of my life ,

I surrender
In total submission my heart cry out for
You Jehovah  in a repented way ;
Hold my hand Jehovah and show me 
The way I need to go ,

Let me be a helping hand in this society
I live in ; Let me teach others the way to 
Go and for them and myself to never take 
Our eyes off of you in all we do ,

And learn to give without asking for a refund
To be able to influence others into aiming for
The best they can be in you .

Never try to play Jehovah that would be the 
Wrong thing to ever do !
This world is a bad place to give your heart 
And soul too , I surrender my all to you Jehovah
God please clean my robe as white as snow
I give you all my heart and soul .


Lilly Emery (C)

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Poetic Judy Lilly Emery

To all my readers you may see that their are grammar errors in my old writings, but these writing are from the 90's ,2000's. I truly didn't think anyone was readying my work . so I just started writing out what I felt and made my pains a story and poems . I had re post these poems and stories all over the internet and I keep them also in file so no one can ever say my work is theirs . I have kept my work as they are just for others to see where it was I started my writing at . The pains are so real not even a game ,The life I had lived I would never wish upon no one . I like to say to all who are taking the steps for change in their life congratulations to the new open doors God bless you . You may have seen my photos on the internet and my writings on Poetry.com and poem hunter etc. you may have seen the hate that others have given to me about my work and my beauty of who I am . But as you can see I will never let the haters Stop me from doing what I love . So I say the same to all of you write your own words and let your heart speak to all your readers . I hope you can understand why I haven't made changes in my work at less not the old ones . My old work are left as they are for me to always remember where it all came from . God bless to all who reads . Lilly Emery /Judy Emery

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