Suspense
You captured me
From the moment I first saw you
Front, back, good all around
I opened you up
And you gave me something wonderful
Something beautiful
I opened you up
And you shared with me your secrets
Divulging in someone you knew not
Now mine to cherish
I opened you up
And I could not put you down
You captured my soul
And, as I turned
I went new places
I flew on angels' wings
I traveled to knew worlds
But at the end
You were lost
And you were revealed
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