Sweet Trickle

by fruitgh0st

May 9, 2020

warm breath of earth beating

quaking beneath us

sweet trickle

soft still beating against the water

glow of echoed bleating

thumping, suspiciously

living deliciously entangled in the brush

we are at the mercy of the wind’s warm blush

crumbling

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Annette M VelasquezMay 9, 2020

Your writing style shows originality and innovation. The use of language and vivid imagery is effective. Short, to the point, exquisite in it's wording and rhyme.