Swim
I was told swim is a complicated sport
I was told my time is good
but I felt that the 35 seconds could be a 32
people ask why I do swim
i do swim because of the rush you feel after your heat
something about being in the water
no one depending on you
just you and your thoughts
the feeling after you had a 2 hour practice
to a 2 hour afternoon practice
the feeling I could overcome
the complicated sport of swimming
is the feeling I never want to forget
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