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prominence stands above
darkness surrounding now
starting in hushed whispers
praying no rocks on trail
upward upward we climb
legs aching, keep climbing
cool mountain air we gulp
eleven thousand feet
cold winds whipping around
finally reach the top
still surrounded in black
the waiting is over
light on the horizon
golden touching the peaks
pink lacing through the clouds
us basking in the warmth
snow crowning the ridges
see the majestic alpines
beholding the meadows
earth in all it's glory
feeling the peace at last
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