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Sysiphean


 

MamÍ, would you love me if I were the sun

that everything revolves around

Would you have felt less empty

On the day of your ultrasound

 

Mamá, would you love me if I were clay

On which to practice human pottery

Would you have felt more blessed

If I had won the genetic lottery

 

Mommy, would you love me if I were diamond

And impossible to break

Would you have had less worries

If I were always less at stake

 

Mom, would you love me if I were ink

And impossible to stain

Would you feel more accomplished

If I were able to carry a name

 

Mother, would you love me if I were the son

Whom everything revolves around

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Katerina
<p>This is absolutely beautiful... passionate beyond words. Poetry is meant to touch people&#39;s inner heart. This is the first poem I&#39;ve read on here that&#39;s done that.</p>

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