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take a break


Sometimes in your life you have to take breaks to space out and find yourself out of the void. I've disappeared and came back to find myself coming out so much better than before and so much healthier than before I know I'm not the only one noticing that I don't act the same as I once did. I can come back and my poetry will be much sharper I could come back and even see the world lighter. I have come back stronger and my life has changed for the better the opportunities for me have grown and my heart is slowly beginning to glow. School hasn't been as hard anymore and now my own vocabulary has gotten more ecstatic than before my words seem to rhyme every word I say and I can't lie but it's never been this way. It's like every small spark in me is finally ready to explode.
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Katiecreates

Hello fellow readers I'm Katie I love writing poetry and writing stories about small things that terrify me and things that are most important to me I hope you love my poetry and are excited to see more that I have to offer! "Good people go through bad things even when they haven't done anything wrong because that's just how the world is"

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal journey of self-discovery and growth with some universal resonance.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple ideas per section: disappearance, return, improvement, poetry, opportunity, growth.

DarkSentimentBright

Overwhelmingly positive: better, healthier, stronger, glow, ecstatic, explosion of potential.

StillEnergyExplosive

Building momentum through repeated affirmations and climactic 'explode' finale.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 24 lines across six stanzas; falls in 16-30 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Simile ('It's like every small spark'), metaphors (void, glow, spark), but mostly declarative.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; introspective first-person reflection throughout.

Free Verseidentityspiritualsimilemetaphorpersonificationrepetition

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