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Taken the Advantage


How was I supposed to know It would come to this? How could I have known It was blinded bliss? There was no way possible To see this running Actions so sneaky Face so becoming I asked God Why I gave my love away? I thought they were here Here to stay They were nothing but fools Who deceived me in every way I sit here, now Going through the signs Of how one could be so And walk on out I thought we had something I thought we had a pact I thought they had my back But now there’s something wrong with that
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Zelle Moore
Thank you very much. That means a lot and mos def lets keep in touch
T.A.Z.
You have an amazing talent. All you need is some one to help you cultivate it. Check out some of mine. You can e-mail me and we'll talk poetry. http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/was-i-just-crush http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/how-couldwhat-did

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