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TAKERS


Take advantage Take for granted Take all I have to give, Then ask for more. And while I concede, even making sacrifices to do so, I feel no gratitude, no appreciation. Your thank you feels hollow, superficial As if to instead say, “You’ve got the means, I expect you to help me.” As if I myself am not struggling. Still, I take the time, expend the energy, Provide what you require. Until another need arises, another favor, another loan. A continuous cycle of feeling over used & under appreciated. Take advantage Take for granted Take all I have to give, Then ask for more… This must be what the giving tree felt like.
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jwiener
I really like how you used the same four lines in the beginning and end of the poem, to give it a circular feeling. This definitely adds to the sense that people will keep "taking" and will continue to do so, since a circle is never-ending. Wonderful poem- check out "poetry writing tips" in the "resources" section for even more inspiration!

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