Tears

Tears
By Nashon Kemp
Tears are falling down my face like a stream or like a river. Just thinking about all he put u threw gives me chills and shivers but u have no one to blame but urself cuz only u know your self worth...I liked u told u not only once but twice...but it's like I'm shooting at the stars while I'm trying to skate on thin ice my mind tells me it won't happen yet my hearts pulling me in...if only they could see u for what I do then maybe they'll stop using u and coming in and out ur life like ur a gym... the bets are off and in the end it may seem like u lost but since u already paid the cost u mine as well bear ur cross...deep words yet this all has a deeper mean...dry like a dessert is ur river of love yet u still try to navigate ur love boat...you've been used more than a bathroom and you have been treated worst...you say u like me to but won't date me...my only question is why not date the only guy that can see and care about your true worth? When in the end u wouldn't have to worry about getting hurt so stop the procrastination and move forward to ur true destination..like m.j and akon said just hold my hand don't worry my love I'll clear up that teary eyed river right were u stand ...and then maybe I can be ur superman and save you from all thus pain you can be my Lois lane cuz ur all I need in this world your all there really is for me to gain

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Nate the Great

There's this girl I love that's always getting in bad relationships. And on day I was sitting there with her and this all came to me . So I spoke it to her these are true emotions none if that fake stuff

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for sharing this poem

intersting how this girl's experience inspired you to write this

very descriptive and im sure she'll embrace it

great job

Nate the Great

Thank you

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