Tell Me

Thu, 12/25/2014 - 17:57 -- rexiusm

im trying to look inside, i dont know why, but i wanna cry

but the tears wont flow like the river does, is it because of love, that i cannot cry?

but tell me, do you really love me? will you stand by my side until i die

this isnt a proposal, its a promise i want you to make; make a choice if you can't and tell me.

because i want to know if were soulmates, a duo, a couple

i dont want to be no juliet, dont die for me.

stand by me if i cry, i tell you i won't lie, im lonely

so tell me-tell me if you love me, just make a promise that you can keep.

just promise me you will stay, dont go away, dont leave.

 

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