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Tempest

by Raymundusary

January 21, 2022

I'm lost in your gaze You my starry moonlight I miss seeing you Being near your sweet charm The more lost for you I miss walking with you Before my way back to you I hope you don't forget me This wind Seems to change Everything turns blue And I'm drowning Before the tide The atmosphere is getting cold The wait is over

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931535Apr 6, 2022

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-28201c22-7fff-a093-74e3-27bf71641c72"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Stage: A very sad speaker. Tone: Longing/despressing </span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-28201c22-7fff-a093-74e3-27bf71641c72"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Language & Lit. Devices: Your use of imagey to express grief is amazing. I have no comments to change anything.</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-28201c22-7fff-a093-74e3-27bf71641c72"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Structure & Layout: I think your structure and layout work really well!</span></span></p><div> </div>

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