thanks for nothing

by dakotamiller723

September 26, 2013

teachers

figures, standing, talking,

doing, saying,

boring.

students

struggling, listening, understanding,

attention-paying, hearing,

bored.

school

hassling, troubling, hurting,

wasting, fighting,

why.

education

gleaming, brightening, flashing

exciting, helping

glorious.

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dakotamiller723Sep 26, 2013

<p>I normally write in a style that is an obvious rhyme scheme with stanzas of four lines. To write in another format that differed as much as this one did from my own was quite odd; however, I enjoyed it, and will definitely try this out again! </p>