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The clouds up high


Oh!What a wonderful sight That cumbers me in a mystical fright The clouds high in flight So peaceful with a radiant light I sit in awe gazing At the marvellous setting The clouds form myriads of shapes That leaves one's imagination in aches Streaks of lightning , clasps of thunder Displayed by the clouds anger Raining tempest and terror Endosing the world in pure horror True to the tales of old Not all that glitters is gold So pay attention to its motion Lest you be swallowed up in its notion The clouds marvellous grandeur Only ends when veiled in nights cover Oh really!Truth be told The mystery only begins to unfold
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Mixes personal observation with abstract meditation on nature's dual beauty and danger.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple ideas per stanza: awe, shapes, storm danger, philosophical warnings, mystery.

DarkSentimentBright

Oscillates between wonder and fear; awe tempered by caution and dread.

StillEnergyExplosive

Exclamations, active verbs (gazing, swallowed, unfold), storm imagery drive kinetic intensity.

MicroLengthEpic

20 lines places poem in 16-30 line range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphors (clouds as anger, glitter/gold), personification, simile; some ornamentation.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric internal voice; minimal narrative or dramatic persona shifts.

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