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The distance is the sound unheard

by muizz (Mark)

CC BY-NC
One heartbeat is but a lyric or note Two is the beautiful tune ,song unwrote One beat alone is but blessed to hear But without another the meanings unclear Saying state there's hands for every other And life can't be lived until they met another Wise mens words are nay loves definition Because if loves strong it can prove fiction Heartbeats say that were meant to be Might never find each other through destiny When there are lovers who lucky couplets In a free verse poem sang with trumpets A Heartbeats destiny is only found When two lovers plays the same sound
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muizz (Mark)

Im a seventeen year old who had a passion for writing since the 4th grade I thought it was going to take me somewhere seeing that I was the only boy who couldn't play sports who was born with a soft soft voice and remains misunderstood I have spent my childhood trying to escape every comer of it yet still I have gotten nowhere I still have big dream like making children's dream come true and going to America

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Blends personal love experience with abstract philosophical meditation on connection.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple ideas per stanza: heartbeat metaphor, love definition, destiny, connection theme.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly hopeful and romantic, though questioning; some melancholy undertones present.

StillEnergyExplosive

Moderate intensity; lyrical reflection with rhythmic momentum but no explosive moments.

MicroLengthEpic

14 lines; falls within 16-30 range adjusted for quatrain structure.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphor of heartbeats as music/communication; extended conceit throughout.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric voice; introspective and meditative without narrative or dramatic persona.

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