The Heart
The heart beats have the pauses.
The heart beats are needing to continue.
The blood is an energy of the beats.
The pressure boosts it if it needs.
The pauses are long or short, it depends.
The pressure is growing..
The pressure is lowing..
The medium is normally complete.
The heart can change the rhythm.
But I can change my rhymes !
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Yurii Tkachenko
Yurii Tkachenko publish his poems at The Academy of the heart and mind site.
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Mix of personal body awareness and abstract physiological concepts.
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple cardiac ideas layered densely across ten lines with repetition.
DarkSentimentBright
Neutral-positive; empowerment in final lines tempers mechanical observations.
StillEnergyExplosive
Steady rhythmic language mimics heartbeat; moderate intensity, no explosiveness.
MicroLengthEpic
Ten lines falls in 7-15 range, scored as lower-mid.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Minimal figures; mostly declarative. Blood as energy is faint metaphor.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Primarily lyric internal reflection with sudden dramatic claim in closing.
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