The Old Ways
We live in an age
\Where the virtual page
Takes centre stage
Who needs a face
Or a voice
To converse or make a choice
Or pay a bill
Society is going downhill
Mobile phones that can do almost anything
Are socially dictating
What almost everyone is saying and doing
The fact that I am writing this on a computer
Only reinforces that comment pointer
Even children are 'locked in'
Being born in this time it seems its genetically programmed in
But what of the books that catalogue histories long past
And the the old building made to last
And concern for the natural world is disappearing fast
And when people laugh
Usually because of some different person they pass
I feel out of place
Like a snail in race
And I don't want to pick up the pace
Because I prefer the old ways
When people say-most of the time-something kind to someone coming their way
And not being connected digitally was ok
People watch videos and listen to records and cassette tapes
They went to the library and to the shops
Now its all online-ok if something at the store is out of stock
Or your housebound but have internet but there was still the landline but that's now gone
Call me a square peg-if anyone even knows what that means now
But we managed to negotiate life and get around
Without endless subscriptions logins and digital worlds where the soul drowns
There are many who would disagree
But I don't feel that we are free
The world our families fought and sometimes died for
Is not the one outside our doors
And people have forgotten how to talk
They can swear and be unpleasant
Ruin someone's life with something they've said
After hearing it from a so called friend
Lets rewind back a few years
To a world without social paranoia and chronic fears
Of who someone is and what they might do when they get near
Our little space
Lets the first few words you say
To a new face
Be kind and nice
Get to know them enough to form a justified opinion before believing the lies
So much hate and unwarranted dislike
Too easily and too early crawls inside
Even before some people are adults
This is the state of the world
So how about we just let go
Of the pattern we've come to know
And show some love
You don't need to believe in a god above
Or have absolute trust
In fact some distance is good
But don't take it for granted
That everyone's a monster
We can make this life better
If connect directly and stop perceiving each other
Based on another
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal critique of digital age mixed with universal concerns about technology.
SparseMeasureDense
Dense accumulation of ideas about technology, society, disconnection, kindness throughout.
DarkSentimentBright
Predominantly critical and anxious but ends with hopeful call for connection and love.
StillEnergyExplosive
Conversational urgency, rhetorical questions, rapid idea shifts create sustained intensity.
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 70+ lines; extended meditation with multiple stanzaic breaks.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Similes (snail in race, square peg), metaphors (digital worlds where soul drowns), personification present.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; confessional speaker reflecting on personal alienation and broader critique.
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