The Price of Small Things
I have seen a revolution
folded inside a paper bag of apples.
Not the supermarket kind of love—
just a trembling hand
From a child who counts her first salary in heartbeats,
not dollars
And decided to quench my hunger
what ecosystem measures that?
A neighbor once handed me water—
not a jugful but a cup that confesses
“I see your thirst and I refuse to let you disappear quietly.”
And lovers travel forests in search of roses,
but sometimes a single one survives the massacre
and says more than the bouquet:
“I am fragile enough to mean love to you.”
Parents use kisses to seal love
on foreheads of loved children saying:
“You are permitted to exist.”
What greater inheritance than that?
And then—
a student, still wet with the innocence of unbroken dreams,
throws words carelessly—
“You are the best Teacher. I love you.”
Simple gifts are anarchists—
they riot against the tyranny of price.
And I—an archivist of tenderness—
hoard these as memories:
a bottle of juice,
a kiss,
a rose,
a cup of water.
The world will keep counting its money.
And I will keep counting apples in shopping bags.
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Personal anecdotes ground abstract meditation on love and value.
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Moderate idea density; lyrical expansions balance conceptual moments.
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Deeply affirmative, celebratory of tenderness and human connection.
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Insurgent metaphors create intensity; sustained but not explosive pace.
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Rich metaphors, personification, vivid imagery throughout; highly ornamented.
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Pure lyric introspection; internal voice reflecting on lived experience.
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