There you were

August 10, 2012

There you were, You were justy standing there, Quiet, Not really saying a word, But to be honest you don't really need to, Cause your eyes, Your eyes they do that for you, Even though you stand there and smile all nice So nice and sweetly, Your eyes they stare, They do they stare so So truely deeply, And well there you were.............

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jwienerAug 12, 2012

This poem is so sweet, and really has the feeling of true love. I loved how you talked about the person's eyes, because you give the reader such a clear image, and it seems as if they are going through this discovery with you.

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