These Lines
Disjointed ravings
a madwoman's moan
sophomoric drivel
- not art.
Pathetic scribblings
inked rambling
- a feeble
yelp?
- Or
Riveting
though raw
powerful
with passion
stunning-
exuberant.
What to make
of these lines?
are they
one, the other,
neither,
both?
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