These petty Saloons
Flowers, Balloons
these petty saloons
are filled with men, some tipsy
they boast and they batter
their clothes in a tatter
from voyages never thought taken
and as for the women
the widows the verman
they sit and wait patiently
for their folks and the jokes
and in debt they soak
no money, not even a sum
so they sit in this pit
drunkin and lit
from the fiery burn of the rum
they sing and they jostle
their people, their hostile
they never change their ways
no one cares
no one even dares
because they shoot daggers in stares
Flowers, balloons
these petty saloons
the state of these men stay dazed
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