They Rise
Greatness
spawn’s reincarnation
like the dawn
rebirths the sun
Alexander
Patton, and Churchill sleep
but woken
rebecome
When destiny calls
the greatest rise
to battle
zero sum
And stem the tide
before the flood
on shores of victory
— won
(Dreamsleep: December, 2025)
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Mix of personal reference (Alexander Patton) with abstract destiny and greatness philosophy
Dense packing of ideas: reincarnation, destiny, battle, victory across compact lines
Triumphant tone celebrating greatness, rising, victory despite challenging circumstances
Explosive verbs: spawn, rebirths, woken, risecome, battle, stem; urgent momentum throughout
Approximately 6-7 lines of actual content; micro to very brief poem
Rich metaphors: reincarnation, dawn/sun rebirth, tide/flood; ornate compressed language
Primarily lyric voice with dramatic proclamation; addresses universal destiny but personal invocation
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