They wont come
I knew
I always knew
They would not come
They say they care
They say I matter to them
But they just abandon me
Like I never existed
They do this
They like to this
They think quiet people dont deserve attention
They want us to disappear
They hurt you
But they wont come for consolation
Leave it bro
Just move on
They wont come
Accept it
Because cruel people dont care
They dont know your agony
They dont know your misery
If you want revenge
just accept it already now
they will never come
And they dont want you to realize that
You are lovable
You can do it
Dont wait for them
They wont come
They are gone
Gone to destroy another quiet person
They wont come to apoligize
You are not alone either
We are with you
You dont need them
They know it too
That is why
They wont come
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Primarily personal abandonment and pain, some universal reflection on cruelty
Dense, rapid-fire ideas about rejection, betrayal, healing across compressed lines
Predominantly negative pain/abandonment, shifts toward hope and solidarity near end
Urgent, repetitive urgency with short declarative lines; emphatic but not explosive
Approximately 35 lines; falls in 31-60 range
Minimal metaphor/simile; mostly direct statements and one 'like' simile
Primarily lyric internal voice; brief shifts to collective 'we' near end
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