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think positive,forget negative


Oh that place where i went 
Eerything was wrong when i guessed

Shining stars were hidden in the sky
Back birds were flying without shy

Fear was biting my dead heart
Felt like my heart would torn apart

Chilled breeze was cutting my body
It was hard to stay for everybody

Haunting trees were staring at me
Laughing flowers were taunting at me

I could not stand there anymore
I ran away for sure

My wet eyes were demanding to close them
I did accept because need them

Suddenly i reached to blind well
Water was turned into ashes by the well

I steppedback because ifeard it
Someone pushed me befire i realized it

I fell down in well for fulfill its hunger
I was not ready for its digestion

I looked upward with terrying eyes
I was  shocked they were shadow of frights

They were telling me you entered in black thoughts area
You'll die because youare trapped in that area

I remembered how i entered in that area
I took side to black thouhghts
I did bad things which were undissolved 

There a lot of mistakes 
Now it's useless, it's too late

I have regret 
This can be correct

I blew out the candles of hopes
I burnt all supports of ropes

Shining pearl came out from my eyes
Telling me don't be fright

My dead heart came to alive
Give me switch of hope lights

My soul gave me new supports of rope
I grabbed it and climbed up for sure

All were telling me mistakes can be correct
Just don't try to further to harm yourself

I realized and took a side to bright thoughts
And shadows of fright ran away from light of hopes

Bright thoughts faded away with power of all supports 
Then i felt sleep and lie down on the land

When i open my my eyes there was meadow land
Pleasure breeze welcomed me

Long trees dancing for me
Melody of chirping birds was relaxing
The colourful were singing

Meadow was sayiing to me we were already present here
You were unknown that we were here

Now you found us and hope you will choose correct thing
Never turn to black side when you think

If you wanna alive us than alive yourself
It was you who can do everything by yourself 

I agreed to all and thought it's time to pay for my mistakes
I would never take a blsack side for more mistakes

I would save my meadow from destruction
Now it's my duty to save it's shadow

Trust and believe both knotted my hands with their hands
And said we would always togethe

Thanks to all to give me new spirit
This time i would give you surety

I will always choose right side
And will never choose dark side this time

 

 

 

 

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