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THINKING ABOUT YOU UNTIL IT HURTS


Thinking About You UnTel It Hurt 

I realize the best part of love is when 
It was something to believe in , 
When love was a rush in both of us  
Oh how fun it was ; 
I Didn't Think Life Could Get Better, 
Then It All Seemed To Fall Together , 
But Things Soon Changed. 
Attitude of a cheat and lies in the eyes 
And the feelings kept honting me in the 
Night's ever since I saw the look in his  
Eyes I new our love is at our ending parts, 
Now I am lying alone thinking of you till 
It hurt , Oh how could you do this to my  
Soul and your heart had gone cold , 
Your Kisses I could feel on my lips and it felt like ice, 
I Never Understood What Went Wrong 
But all I know is I'm hearing our sad love song , 
I Didn't Think It Would Still Hurt This Long 
All The Things You Said To Me, 
What a nasty heart brake , my days and nights  
Haven't been the same , 
I just never though when I gave you my heart  
You would never brake it , 
But then that is why we have love songs and the  
Sand one that comes next ! 
What a mess you had given my heart , 
And all of The Promises you ever made to me was lies 
Living Is Loving,  
Loving Is Living when love was in our hearts , 
Then Started The Names And The Jokes. 
And that is when my heart started to know you have 
Been doing me wrong , But what hurt I seen it all in your eyes , 
I Tried Everything to understand ,  
While you were having  your time away my heart is still on the  
Brake downs of a nasty heartache , 
You try to come back home  and even looked me in the eye's 
To say you was so wrong , And that is when I said I already  
Got past you so move on I did ! 

Lilly Emery (C)

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Poetic Judy Lilly Emery

To all my readers you may see that their are grammar errors in my old writings, but these writing are from the 90's ,2000's. I truly didn't think anyone was readying my work . so I just started writing out what I felt and made my pains a story and poems . I had re post these poems and stories all over the internet and I keep them also in file so no one can ever say my work is theirs . I have kept my work as they are just for others to see where it was I started my writing at . The pains are so real not even a game ,The life I had lived I would never wish upon no one . I like to say to all who are taking the steps for change in their life congratulations to the new open doors God bless you . You may have seen my photos on the internet and my writings on Poetry.com and poem hunter etc. you may have seen the hate that others have given to me about my work and my beauty of who I am . But as you can see I will never let the haters Stop me from doing what I love . So I say the same to all of you write your own words and let your heart speak to all your readers . I hope you can understand why I haven't made changes in my work at less not the old ones . My old work are left as they are for me to always remember where it all came from . God bless to all who reads . Lilly Emery /Judy Emery

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