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Thoughts


My thoughts sat in a dark corner

i kept my head ticking

my feet tapping

my fingers thrumming

becuase to stop

to stand still is when it would flood me

and i would break

i felt it

the air lessening  in my lungs

as my thoughts throttled me long skeletal fingers grasping my throat

it was frantic now my movments

only the keyboards tap tap tapping kept me from succumbing to the heady feeling of lost breath

in out in out in out

inoutinoutinoutinoutinoutinoutinoutinoutinout

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Chloe999

Im a young poet like most of you! I really hope you enjoy my writing. Its nothing serious im really just messing around with my style.

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Chloe999
<p>oh im so glad you enjoyed it</p>
Prefabcat
Wow, your poem caught me from the first line to the last. I can relate to it. Great job.

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