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The thoughts that are spinning


The room is spinning, 

the walls are tilting, 

there is a yellow light at the end.

 

i walk to the light,

and there i see, 

What im suppose to be.

 

The doctor, The helper, 

the nurse, and the little old lady in the corner.

This where im suppose to be.

 

To help the people,

To help those in need,

This is where im suppose to be.

 

The colors are bright,

But people tell me that its not meant to be,

but this is where im suppose to be.

 

The room is spinning, 

They think that im crazy, but im just a bit dizzy.

But i know where im suppose to be.

 

All they need is hope,

To help them believe they can make it one more day.

This is where im suppose to be.

 

 

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jordanpierce
<p>HI Everybody, i normally don't put my poetry out into something for everyone else to see. That being said i am a little self concious and it is taking everything in me not to keep changing the words. For every body who is reading this poem could you leave comments and just give me feed back on what &nbsp;I have written.</p><p>Love always,&nbsp;</p><p>Jordan</p>

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