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Through me you will see a loser


 

Through me you will see a loser

As in, someone who has lost things--

A good one at that

When there are winners in the world,

they had to lose something to win right?

Isn't that what sacrifice means

Who would you be today without loss

Without a loss of  innocence and,

Changing who we are on the inside and out

Some people move on from those traumatic events

Like your brother dying then suffering from crying

Then you feel like dying

People are holding on to the loved ones that are gone

Gone like the birds in the winter

Pain is just part of the journey,

For everyone,

part of the journey is the end

Everyone does want a happy ending

But that doesn't seem to be trending

In my life

 

Overcoming that loss

That's the secret to success

Moving forward

Forward like a train going on without stopping

Like the cars on the freeway

Sometimes you'll collide with cars

As someone close to me did...

Some say when you leave this world you have won

 

Losing people is always hard

Losing someone who is alive that you love

can be harder

As opposed to losing someone who is dead

Because you know you could've done something differently and there still walking this earth

While your hurting from the rejection

Maybe you felt you should of gave more affection

Or attention so you don't feel the retention

Your friends give you an intervention

Then, tell you Go feel better!

And you alienate yourself

 

We all grieve differently, though.

Some people will hate you for being yourself,

Mourning the way you do

doing what you want,

jealousy is only natural, but

it can go very too far

Till you get a scar

people get hurt and get insecurities

When that happens you lose confidence

Overtime it somehow always comes back

Back but it gives you a knack

Like the smack you used to get when you were young

 

There’s times when you feel unstoppable

at the top,

but once you go down you might flop

it’s as though you lose everything and

fall out and feel the world closing in

Isn't Falling is all about getting back up

It’s what you do to pick yourself back up

Not how you fall

 

Your life makes you. Your actions define you.

I might surprise you--

Delight you. I may be a clown with A frown, but I am as true as the sun in the morning shining light

 

At any time, people can chose to end there life ,give up, but

They are  here being strong and moving through obstacles

So they have a chance to win.

Everyone deserves respect

 

Now being a loser can teach you many things

Cause you to pull some strings

Just to see what it brings

We all need to lose to get better

eventually losing and ending is inevitable.

Inevitable like Thanos in avengers

winning at unexpected times  will happen eventually

Potentially

Fate will Happen

When it does you'll be strong

Through me you will see a loser

 
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