Time
I hope you’re happy,
And you probably are.
You told me lies,
You separated my friends,
You tricked my parents.
And all the while,
You claimed you were “helping”.
At first I truly believed,
That I needed you so I could be,
Whatever I wanted.
But I grew older and smarter,
Which you were trying to prevent.
And despite your security measures,
I found out the truth.
I learned behind your trickery,
From a wise book.
Yes, a book.
You scrambled to cover your tracks,
And you covered them so well,
That people believed you.
But I know the truth now,
You put me under your spell,
And I fell for it.
But nothing is quite worse,
Then the years gone by.
That is what kills me the most.
Not the lies,
Or the endless thoughts.
Those I can take back.
But time, I cannot.
The time you stole is gone forever,
And with it, a piece of me died.
It’s never coming back,
No matter how I try.
There’s nothing left for me here,
Except to try to move on.
But how is that even possible,
When everyone else embraces your lies?
People think I’m crazy,
Because I go against your norms.
But they don’t know your real intentions,
You hide behind you’re lies.
I hope your happy,
And you probably are.
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal betrayal and loss, grounded in autobiographical experience
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple ideas per 10 lines: deception, time loss, isolation, truth-seeking
DarkSentimentBright
Anger, betrayal, grief dominate; minimal redemptive moments
StillEnergyExplosive
Accusatory tone, repeated assertions, building emotional intensity
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47 lines; falls in 31-60 range
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Minimal metaphor/simile; mostly direct accusation and statement
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; direct address to unnamed antagonist
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