a time to recollect

Sat, 10/31/2015 - 19:34 -- Bravo

I like to recollect
i like to reminisce
notice the emphasis
i put on remembrance
i remeber when I was young and dumb
when I get to where I'm going gotta em where I'm from knowing that they wouldn't care if I died there
just another poor soul that lost his mind
Dear mama thanks for caring
I'm still hearing your voice
I still imagine your smile
wishing you can see me as a man instead of a child
I wonder how you deal with five kids driving you wild
I pray to God it wasn't us driving you to the ground
tell how me does that sound
instead of making you proud
we made decisions with precision
that were making you frown
wish I could give you a crown
cause you deserved to be queen

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very heartfelt poem brother

i'm a Man of God who loves and accepts The Lord

prayer changes things, prayer will always be answer

trust in Him

 

check out my poems i wrote to see if it inspires you in any way

Bravo

Thank you I appreciate those words and I've read a few of your poems and inspire they did! @mvpmostvaluablepoet

Bravo

Thank you I appreciate those words and I've read a few of your poems and inspire they did! @mvpmostvaluablepoet

sunflowerseedz

i love this!

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