Time Ticking Down
Quiet as a mouse I creep in,
He’s not there.
I race around collecting my belongings,
10 minutes until he’s home
My fingers shake as I write the note
5 minutes and counting
Dump my phone in the garbage
4 minutes and 23 seconds
The ring goes on the stainless steel counter
3 minutes and 12 seconds
“I’m sorry, I love you, Stay safe.”
3 minutes… but I’m gone
He pulls up to an empty house
Looks around, sees the note
Cries, Calls, Bawls
“Where is she?”
I’m not home.
Soon no one will.
He will look for me, they all will
But I don’t want to be found
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