Time was Never on our Side
Mountains brush clouds, trees sigh and sway aloud
Wind threads and braids through air
clear as glass, too perfect to last
Pavement wavers under our feet
Stop signs dripping in heat
Neighbors watch as the children run past
Too perfect to last
Hearts drawn in the clear, white snow
Cold hands brush and don't let go
The kids in their hoodies walk staring down
They don't know what to do when love is point
A kiss in the dark, sweet and fast
Too perfect to last
Running away from lines drawn deep
painful scars the brain shall keep
looking for love, can't find it no more
in boys who just want the neighborhood whore
swear you'll love me in spite all my past
Living in caskets made out of glass
It was never meant to last
living with shadows, you turn on the light
Close the doors, seal out the night
Through these floors, the blood stained beams
Floating through heavens, the sky a scene
Its dark, but light, open your eyes and make a wish
It's answered, you won't know it though
constellations, the stars in code
In this moment, time is slowed
Nothing will ever last
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Primarily personal/autobiographical love and heartbreak with philosophical moments about impermanence.
Dense, rapid idea progression: love, loss, scars, transcendence compressed across multiple conceptual shifts.
Predominantly melancholic and negative: betrayal, pain, heartbreak, though ending offers subtle transcendent hope.
Intense emotional volatility, urgent pacing, fragmented syntax creates kinetic tension and restlessness throughout.
Approximately 45-50 lines; falls within 31-60 line range.
Rich metaphorical language: mountains brush clouds, pavement wavers, caskets of glass, blood-stained beams, constellations as code.
Nearly pure lyric internal voice; raw emotional confession without dramatic distance or narrative persona.
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