Timely Love

If moments were hours  

And hours were days

how long would it be 

before you went away?

how long would it be 

before you called my name  

Say "my darling my angel, 

In my heart you will stay." 

But moments are moments 

and hours aren't days 

you are not staying 

Your mind is a maze 

fearfully false 

yet tragically true 

Wonderfully awsome

Oh how I love you

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