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Tinta dan Penyesalan


dibalik anugerah tuhan sepenuh hati terdapat takdir yang menyayat hati dan aku hanya secarik kertas yang mencari arti tinta hitam selalu membasahi ku untuk menulis arti kehidupan ku namun tinta itu hanya bersemayam di ingatan ku beberapa tahun aku membersamai tinta itu naasnya diri ku merusak keindahan tinta itu dan aku bermohon kepadanya agar sang tinta tidak meninggalkan ku terkadang berusaha mempertahankan takdir yang tertulis lebih berat daripada menciptakan takdir itu sendiri hal ini yang membuat sang penulis bersemayam menulis takdir dibandingkan menciptakan takdir
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