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To the Animal With Three Hearts and the Silent Judgement


A beautiful creature sifting along the ocean floor, questioning every move I make as I swim near him. He comes towards me in curiosity, In wonder, so shy, questioning himself why he is starting to approach me. One of the smartest creatures in the sea, he continues to seek wonder, hope, perseverance, and trust, all because of curiosity. Every day, we choose to do something out of spite, fear, joy, and even sadness, all because of one thing. Wonder. I saw the one thing I chose to get to see: what wonder can feel like, its Actions and outcomes may be, just for fun, or even for the sake of asking. But today, I chose to see this beautiful eight-legged, three-hearted creature, and his amazing silent sense of judgment. I truly saw the wonder staring right back at me. - Inspired by the octopus essay in World of Wonders by Aimee Nezhukumatathil
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal encounter with octopus explores abstract concept of wonder universally.

SparseMeasureDense

Moderately paced; philosophical reflection alternates with narrative observation throughout.

DarkSentimentBright

Admiration, awe, and reverence dominate; deeply positive emotional resonance throughout.

StillEnergyExplosive

Contemplative pace with gentle movement; quiet intensity rather than explosive.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 20 lines; falls in 16-30 line range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Metaphor, personification of wonder, poetic description; moderately ornamented language.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric/internal reflection on personal encounter; minimal dramatic distance.

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