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Tommy


Dear Tommy

I don't know where you're from or who you are

But you are tearing me apart

You have the money, the ambition and the motivation

But maybe not the action

Your drive is what strives you to success

Leave your stupid comments in your pocket

To keep your dream from being distressed

Everybody Betray Me

But your still impressed

You may not think it's funny

But your faster than the bunny to the cult classics

 

Yo motivated me to not give a shit

It's my dream

Pinky Promise

 

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