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Too Good To Be True


Everything seems to be going by so fast; too quick. A new connection that started 5 months ago now seems too good to be true! It started small and simple...then it started to grow and didn't stop. Two people who never met before just connected and I couldn't explain to you what made this so easy. There's no labels to describe this connection...No matter how much I want to be in denial ~ this connection is beyond what you would consider just a friendship... Based upon every interaction via in person, texts, calls, etc. from another person's perspective, they would call me absolutely absurd in my denials. Though this connection is not stopping anytime soon...there are many barriers that cannot be crossed. There are people that would and are not agreeing with me. They say it's too risky and shouldn't have even started. :( I know what I got myself into and I don't regret anything. I get that there is a 5 year age gap and more life experience. They say that I need to set aside my feelings so that I can see the red flags clearly - reality is that: my feelings are not in the way. They say that I'm going to get hurt, or manipulated in some way. They say that if they were truly a devout person in the faith then they would know better and would've stopped this before anything even started. These people don't get or know him like I do; and it annoys me for them to make such assumptions!
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Yvonne Boehne

Just tryna' write poetry that always glorifies God and who He is, what he has done for me, and what He can and will do for you! If God can transform my life, I know without a doubt he can transform yours too! You are NEVER too far gone, or broken for God! Come to Jesus just as you are and give your life to him and watch the change happen when you turn to Jesus and live for Him!! Being a Christian is never easy, just as life isn't easy, but our only hope is in Jesus Christ the one and only!!

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal/autobiographical; specific relationship conflict and defense

SparseMeasureDense

Extremely dense; multiple arguments, counterarguments, justifications packed tightly

DarkSentimentBright

Mixed: defensive joy about connection offset by frustration with critics

StillEnergyExplosive

High intensity; defensive tone, repetition, exclamation marks, tilde emphasis

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 28 lines; falls in 16-30 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Minimal figurative language; mostly declarative and argumentative prose

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; first-person reflection and emotional defense

Free Verseloveidentityprotestrepetitionallusion

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