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Too Much Brain to Waste


I am a student
I live in the hood but my mind lives in the books
Instead of sharing ways to break the rock apart
I rather share these words that seem to flow like word fart
Brooklyn
New Carrollton
All places that want to hold me back
Destroy my future ahead of me
Place a ring on my finger
Marry me and try to keep me trapped
I sit in classrooms on hot, sunny days
Because I'd rather burn from heat of a working brain
Than to die from streets that hit me with sun rays
I am a student
Whose parent can't afford much but put me on a pedestal
To tell me that one day I will be great
She'd say
Keep reading those books, you'll make it to the finish line one way
These words are my gods
For I am the maker of my capabilities
Although my pockets sit on empty
And my home await eviction
Instead of waiting for the world to change
And protesting to my unknown conviction
I am making a name for myself
Not enriched with wealth or big houses and cars
Simply putting my hopes and dreams in the air
Making a place for them next to the stars.

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Comments (19)

Delebartholomew
a well illustrated poem made of sound literary quality. I like it.
salliemikayla7
<p>I really love this! It is verp deep and inspiring. Id like to know how things are with you! Great poem!</p>
Edemic305
<p>Excellent</p>
Marjorie Austin
<p>Agreed.</p>
Marjorie Austin
<p>Always be grateful that your parents never held you back. They have taught you to rise up and fly. It could be much worse and is for some people.</p>
Marjorie Austin
<p>I live in the mountains and poor. Being trapped is a state of mind. If we don&#39;t want to be left out, we have to stay in the game.</p>
Marjorie Austin
<p>Audrey was a wise one indeed.</p>
Marjorie Austin
<p>Good advice</p>
Marjorie Austin
<p>Very nice</p>
Ameurer7689
<p>this is really good!</p>
may.nicole7
<p>I like it!&nbsp; Remember: "Nothing is impossible. The very word itself says I'm possible" -Audrey Hepburn You can do it.</p>
giftedlikeyou
Nice!!!!!!! Absolutely amazing!!!!
GGicefire
<p>Don't worry. Books are the answer</p><p>Were the answer</p><p>Will always be the answer.</p><p>Nothing can hold you back.</p><p>They don't want you to be smarter than they are</p><p>But they don't think enough to know that you already are.</p><p>To try to learn tells more than anything.</p><p>Know everything you can.</p><p>Knowledge is power.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>And books are beautiful.</p>
tsahay.douglas345
<p>I love tis... I also live in brooklyn. I understand :)</p>
14hoska
<p>Really loved reading this poem. You will go far.</p>
Olgacortes
<p>Excellent poem.</p>
Emberlite
<p>I love the sense of motivation you convey throughout the whole poem and how you explain that you won&#39;t let your environment hold you back. Never give up.</p>
rocketscientist3
<p>This is beautifully written! I love the story it tells, and it&#39;s unique. Great job!</p>
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
great poem-i like the tone of it it reflects on the importance of being greater use what you going through as an motivation to inspire others

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