Torn Apart (My first Etheree Experiment Poem)
Sound
Is what
I hear now
For it is you
That becon's me Dear
For it is you, I hear
So what if you yell and scream
Who are you to tell me, that Dear
You were never near tearing my heart
Teary eyes, crows fly, we die, torn apart!
Authors notes: I am learning all forms of poetry in online classes this is what they call Etheree Experiments it starts out 1-10 syllables each line ending with 10 line being 10.
So this is my first one of that form and it was spur of the moment poetry!
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