Totally Normal Behavior
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Personal anxiety and suffering grounded in specific experience, minimally abstract
Multiple interconnected ideas: fairness, mental illness, existential questioning densely packed
Overwhelmingly negative: drowning, claws, gloom, suffering, dark despair throughout
Urgent questioning, visceral imagery like claws, repetition drives intensity forward
16 lines, falls in 16-30 range
Rich metaphors: drowning, claws, traps, locks, personified darkness and anxiety
Pure lyric interior monologue, deeply introspective first-person voice throughout
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