Train Wreck
The gust are building
circling low; it gets dark.
A freight train passes,
not the ones made of steel.
The funnel barrels along,
leaving none behind.
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I'm a 23 year old college student based out of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. Currently working on a full length novel as of Aug 2012 and have a few short stories as well. Open to any feedback, criticism, etc and if interested in knowing more about me or offering professional editing services, please email me at [email protected]
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